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Clueless by ~XDarkEmoAngelNinjaX:iconXDarkEmoAngelNinjaX:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Spoken Word


You're all so clueless....,
For when you look at me, what do you see?
A smile on my face, right?
Your so clueless as to what I'm actually feeling,
To what I'm thinking about,
your clueless when it comes to me.
So let me give you a little insight about who I am....
When I smile, I wanna cry.
When I cry, I wanna die....
You'll never understand me, never get me, never....
and all because your clueless to the clues I've already given you.
©2008 ~XDarkEmoAngelNinjaX
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Ummm yea originally written on 1/6/08 and I'm kinda just now putting it on ^_^' he he ya..... that's all...Byez now:wave: and yes of course another one of my short poems -_-'
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~individual-837583:iconindividual-837583: Apr 15, 2008, 9:43:06 PM
I'm not trying to be a bitch, but it would be "*You're* clueless" not "*Your* clueless". "Your" implies ownership, while "you're" is a contraction of "you are".

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"No time for the old in-out, love. I've just come to read the meter."
~XDarkEmoAngelNinjaX:iconXDarkEmoAngelNinjaX: Apr 15, 2008, 10:08:57 PM
Lolz I didn't notice it. Thnx for lettin me know ^_^!

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~individual-837583:iconindividual-837583: Apr 15, 2008, 10:33:39 PM
No problem

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"No time for the old in-out, love. I've just come to read the meter."
~emofireninjagurl7:iconemofireninjagurl7: Apr 17, 2008, 5:45:20 PM
love the poem....it speaks for itself! No one needs to explain it!

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Fergalicious definition make them boys go loco!
F-E-R-G-I-E ain't no other lady put it down like me I'm Fergalicious!

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~XDarkEmoAngelNinjaX:iconXDarkEmoAngelNinjaX: Apr 21, 2008, 5:24:09 PM
Exactly ^_^!!!

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~emofireninjagurl7:iconemofireninjagurl7: Apr 22, 2008, 12:42:09 PM
exactly what?

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Fergalicious definition make them boys go loco!
F-E-R-G-I-E ain't no other lady put it down like me I'm Fergalicious!

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